Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it is very popular and important, especially for short distances. It is very convenient and affordable for people to work and for students to school.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答切题且语法正确,但内容过于简短,没有补充细节。可以简单说明自行车的颜色、使用频率,或你小时候骑车的感受,让回答更自然、更完整。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. It was a small blue bike that my parents bought me when I was about seven. I used to ride it around our neighbourhood at weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 57.0Gợi ý: 回答有明确观点,也提到了便利和价格实惠等原因,但有几处表达不自然:bikes 是复数,应使用 they;“for people to work”可改为“for people to commute to work”;“for students to school”可改为“for students to get to school”。还可以补充一个具体场景,避免重复使用“very”。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips. They’re convenient and affordable, so many people ride them to work or school. In busy cities, cycling can also be faster than driving.
× Yes, I think it is very popular and important, especially for short distances.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular and important, especially for short distances.
“Bikes”是复数名词,后面应使用复数代词“they”,或直接重复使用“bikes”;原句中的“it”是单数代词,与复数主语不一致。
× It is very convenient and affordable for people to work and for students to school.
✓ Bikes are very convenient and affordable for people to commute to work and for students to get to school.
“for students to school”缺少表示动作的动词,句子结构不完整。可在“to school”前补上“get”,构成“get to school”;同时,“to work”前补上“commute”,更清楚地表达“通勤上班”。