Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike when I was a child, umm, I start to uh bike since I was about 10 or elevens around uh, just right after primary school and I bike to school during my middle school and high school.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, definitely yes. Lots of people enjoy biking in my countries and bike is especially popular among students because it's an it doesn't require license and it's very suitable for travel long distance or not that long. But you know,

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give one or two clear details. Use past tense consistently: say “I had,” “I started,” and “I rode.” Avoid fillers and correct “10 or elevens” to “about ten or eleven.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about ten, just after primary school, and rode it to school during middle and high school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and support it with a specific reason. Use “my country,” “bikes,” and “a license,” and say “suitable for short or long journeys” rather than “suitable for travel long distance or not that long.” Avoid restarting phrases and finish your answer instead of trailing off.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. They’re affordable and don’t require a license, so they’re a convenient way to get around, particularly for short trips to school or nearby shops.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past time, and the clause when I was a child is in the past. Use had rather than have to keep the verb tense consistent.

5: Past tense issue

× I start to bike since I was about 10 or elevens around, just right after primary school.

✓ I started biking when I was about 10 or 11, just after primary school.

The speaker is describing when the habit began in the past, so use started. When is appropriate for a specific age; since usually introduces a starting point for an action that continues to the present.

1: Singular and plural issue

× I start to bike since I was about 10 or elevens around, just right after primary school.

✓ I started biking when I was about 10 or 11, just after primary school.

Use 11, not elevens, when stating someone's age. Ages are expressed with the cardinal number, such as 10 or 11.

5: Past tense issue

× I bike to school during my middle school and high school.

✓ I biked to school in middle school and high school.

The sentence describes a past routine, so use the past-tense form biked. In this context, in middle school and high school is also the natural way to refer to those periods.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× I bike to school during my middle school and high school.

✓ I biked to school in middle school and high school.

Use in to refer to the period when someone attended middle school or high school. During is generally used to describe something happening within a particular event or period.

1: Singular and plural issue

× Lots of people enjoy biking in my countries.

✓ Lots of people enjoy biking in my country.

The sentence refers to the student's home country, so use the singular noun country, not the plural countries.

22: Article errors

× Bike is especially popular among students.

✓ Biking is especially popular among students.

Bike is a singular countable noun and cannot normally be used without an article in this meaning. Using the activity noun biking avoids that article problem and expresses the intended general idea.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Because it's an it doesn't require license.

✓ Because biking doesn't require a license.

The phrase it's an is an incomplete false start, and the following it creates a broken sentence structure. Use one clear subject, such as biking, followed by the verb phrase doesn't require.

22: Article errors

× It doesn't require license.

✓ It doesn't require a license.

License is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before license.

8: Verb + -ing form

× It's very suitable for travel long distance or not that long.

✓ It's very suitable for traveling long or short distances.

After the preposition for, use a gerund when describing the activity: traveling. A natural way to express both options is long or short distances.

1: Singular and plural issue

× It's very suitable for travel long distance or not that long.

✓ It's very suitable for traveling long or short distances.

The sentence refers to distances in general, so use the plural distances. The paired expression long or short also makes the intended meaning clearer.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

High— Tall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
Long— Lengthy; Soon; Yearn for
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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