Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I do. When I was 6 my father bought me a bike and we enjoyed riding it. Every weekend we ride it to different parks and have a picnic there.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, absolutely. We have different kinds of public bikes, like people can use them almost everywhere and that's not gonna be expensive.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答过去的情况,注意使用过去时:将 “Yes, I do” 改为 “Yes, I did”,并将 “ride” 改为 “rode”。“we enjoyed riding it” 中的 it 指代不够清楚,可以说明是你和家人一起骑车。补充的周末活动是具体的细节,但注意句子不要过长。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bike when I was six, and I loved riding it with my family. We often rode to different parks at weekends and had picnics there.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 67.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,但可以把 “public bikes” 说得更自然一些,例如 “bike-sharing services” 或 “shared bikes”。避免用 “like” 连接完整解释,也尽量避免口语中偏随意的 “gonna”;可用 “because” 说明共享单车受欢迎的原因,并补充一个具体好处。

Ví dụ: Yes, absolutely. Bike-sharing services are very popular in my country because shared bikes are easy to find in many places. They’re also an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题问的是你小时候是否有自行车,指的是过去的情况,因此回答也应使用一般过去时。将现在时 do 改为过去时 did。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Every weekend we ride it to different parks and have a picnic there.

✓ Every weekend we rode it to different parks and had a picnic there.

这句话描述的是小时候每个周末的习惯,属于过去的经历,因此 ride 和 have 都应使用过去式 rode 和 had。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× We have different kinds of public bikes, like people can use them almost everywhere and that's not gonna be expensive.

✓ We have different kinds of public bikes. For example, people can use them almost everywhere, and using them isn't expensive.

原句用 like 引出一个完整句子,句子结构不够清晰。可以用 For example 引出例子,并将前面的内容分成独立句子;另外,用 using them 明确指出“不贵”的是使用公共自行车这件事。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Different— Dissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
Expensive— Costly
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