Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course I had a bicycle because I saw most of Chinese children have their own bike in their childhood.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Well, in my country, Dear has a special bike named Shared sharing back equal. That is very useful back.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再补充一个具体细节。表达“我看到很多中国孩子都有自行车”时,应说“many Chinese children had their own bikes”,不要说“most of Chinese children”;同时注意时态一致,谈童年经历时使用过去时。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, just like many of my friends. I often rode it around my neighbourhood after school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 目前回答中的关键词和句子不清楚,影响理解。可以直接回答“自行车在中国很流行”,再具体说明共享单车是什么、为什么方便。注意使用“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing services”,并避免重复或不完整的表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially shared bikes. People can unlock one with a phone app and ride it for short trips. They are convenient and easy to find in many cities.
× I saw most of Chinese children have their own bike in their childhood.
✓ I saw that most Chinese children had their own bikes when they were children.
“Most of”后面通常要接限定词,如“most of the children”;如果后面直接接名词,则用“most Chinese children”。这里应改为“most Chinese children”。
× I saw most of Chinese children have their own bike in their childhood.
✓ I saw that most Chinese children had their own bikes when they were children.
句子描述的是过去童年时期的情况,因此从句中的“have”应使用过去式“had”。可使用“saw that + 从句”来表达“看到/注意到某种情况”。
× I saw most of Chinese children have their own bike in their childhood.
✓ I saw that most Chinese children had their own bikes when they were children.
主语“most Chinese children”是复数,表达这些孩子各自拥有自行车时,用复数“bikes”更合适。注意“each child has their own bike”中也可以用单数“bike”,但这里的主语是复数群体。
× I saw most of Chinese children have their own bike in their childhood.
✓ I saw that most Chinese children had their own bikes when they were children.
“in their childhood”在这里表达不自然。可以改用“when they were children”(当他们还是孩子时),也可以说“during their childhood”。
× Well, in my country, Dear has a special bike named Shared sharing back equal. That is very useful back.
✓ Well, in my country, there is a special kind of bike called a shared bike. It is very useful.
表达“某地有某物”时,应使用“There is/are + 名词”,不能用“Dear has”代替。这里“a special kind of bike”是单数,因此使用“There is”。