Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No. Are you sure? I play football when I'm a child because he's about team working and it's more interesting.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course I see buys a login when I'm working on the street and and on the weekend lots of students like riding bicycle go everywhere.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答“没有”,再用一到两个细节解释原因。避免反问考官“Are you sure?”;过去的经历要使用过去时,例如“played”,并把“team working”改为“teamwork”。注意代词和句子结构,例如用“it was more interesting”,不要用“he's”。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually played football instead because I enjoyed working as part of a team. I found it more exciting than cycling.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 开头直接表明自行车是否受欢迎,然后补充具体观察或理由。删去重复的“and”,并避免使用无法理解的表达(如“I see buys a login”)。注意搭配和语法:可以说“ride bicycles”或“ride a bike”,描述周末习惯时可以说“at weekends”。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. I often see people riding them on the streets, especially students. At weekends, many students cycle to nearby places because it’s convenient and affordable.
× I play football when I'm a child because he's about team working and it's more interesting.
✓ I played football when I was a child because it's about teamwork and it's more interesting.
句子描述的是童年时发生的事情,应使用一般过去时:play 改为 played,am 改为 was。回答过去经历时,注意将相关动词都改为过去式。
× I play football when I'm a child because he's about team working and it's more interesting.
✓ I played football when I was a child because it's about teamwork and it's more interesting.
这里说的是足球(football),应使用表示事物的代词 it,而不是指人的 he。可先确认代词所指的对象,再选择相应的代词。
× Yes, of course I see buys a login when I'm working on the street and and on the weekend lots of students like riding bicycle go everywhere.
✓ Yes, of course. I see bikes a lot when I'm working on the street, and on the weekend lots of students like riding bicycles everywhere.
原句重复使用了 and。连接两个部分时保留一个 and 即可;说完 Of course 后也可以用句号分开,让句子更清楚。
× Yes, of course I see buys a login when I'm working on the street and and on the weekend lots of students like riding bicycle go everywhere.
✓ Yes, of course. I see bikes a lot when I'm working on the street, and on the weekend lots of students like riding bicycles everywhere.
这里泛指学生喜欢骑自行车,应使用复数 bicycles,而不是单数 bicycle。泛指一类可数物品时,通常使用复数形式。
× Yes, of course I see buys a login when I'm working on the street and and on the weekend lots of students like riding bicycle go everywhere.
✓ Yes, of course. I see bikes a lot when I'm working on the street, and on the weekend lots of students like riding bicycles everywhere.
“like riding bicycle go everywhere”中,riding 后又直接接 go,造成句子结构不完整。可改为 like riding bicycles everywhere,表示“喜欢到处骑自行车”。