Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yeah, of course when I was a child I have a bike at the training wheels and I was not enough brave to ride bi without the training wheels because I afraid I fall down or something.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I think bikes are very popular in my country because almost everyone can buy bikes around me like my friends, my parents and my siblings without me, yes, I can't my bike.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答“小时候有一辆自行车”,再补充你当时为什么依赖辅助轮。注意讲过去的经历要用过去时:用“had”而不是“have”;“带辅助轮”说“with training wheels”;“不够勇敢”说“not brave enough”;“害怕摔倒”说“was afraid of falling”。避免使用不清楚的“or something”,并注意控制句子长度、让表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It had training wheels, and I wasn’t brave enough to ride without them because I was afraid of falling.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎,然后用一两个具体理由或例子支持观点。你提到了朋友和家人,但“almost everyone can buy bikes around me”表达不自然,可改为“many people I know own a bike”;“without me, yes, I can't my bike”意思不清楚,建议删掉或改成完整、明确的句子。可使用“for example”连接具体例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people I know, including my parents and friends, own one. For example, some people use bikes to commute because they’re convenient and affordable.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yeah, of course when I was a child I have a bike at the training wheels and I was not enough brave to ride bi without the training wheels because I afraid I fall down or something.

✓ Yeah, of course. When I was a child, I had a bike at the training wheels and I was not enough brave to ride bi without the training wheels because I afraid I might fall down or something.

这句话讲的是童年经历,应使用过去时。表示“有一辆自行车”时,应该把 have 改为 had。表达当时担心可能摔倒,可以说 “I was afraid I might fall down”。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× Yeah, of course when I was a child I have a bike at the training wheels and I was not enough brave to ride bi without the training wheels because I afraid I fall down or something.

✓ Yeah, of course when I was a child I have a bike with training wheels and I was not enough brave to ride bi without the training wheels because I afraid I fall down or something.

这里表示自行车“装有辅助轮”,应使用 with,而不是 at。可以记住搭配 “a bike with training wheels”。

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs(形容词或副词使用错误)

× Yeah, of course when I was a child I have a bike at the training wheels and I was not enough brave to ride bi without the training wheels because I afraid I fall down or something.

✓ Yeah, of course when I was a child I have a bike at the training wheels and I was not brave enough to ride bi without the training wheels because I afraid I fall down or something.

enough 修饰形容词时通常放在形容词之后,所以应说 “brave enough”,而不是 “enough brave”。

23: Sentence without a verb(句子缺少动词)

× Yeah, of course when I was a child I have a bike at the training wheels and I was not enough brave to ride bi without the training wheels because I afraid I fall down or something.

✓ Yeah, of course when I was a child I have a bike at the training wheels and I was not enough brave to ride bi without the training wheels because I was afraid I fall down or something.

afraid 是形容词,前面需要 be 动词。描述过去的害怕时,应使用 “I was afraid”,不能直接说 “I afraid”。

4: Modal verb usage(情态动词使用错误)

× Yeah, I think bikes are very popular in my country because almost everyone can buy bikes around me like my friends, my parents and my siblings without me, yes, I can't my bike.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are very popular in my country because almost everyone can buy bikes around me like my friends, my parents and my siblings without me. Yes, I can't ride my bike.

情态动词 can't 后面必须接动词原形。原句中的 “I can't my bike” 缺少动词,可以根据意思补上 ride,构成 “I can't ride my bike”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Afraid— Frightened; Reluctant
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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