Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I like to ride it so much my father gave it to me for my 6th birthday.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I don't think that bikes are popular in my country because, uh, our weather is not uh, warm enough for it, so people in my country usually use uh.
Đánh giá
Tổng
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Ответ дан прямо, и подарок на день рождения — уместная деталь. Однако фраза «I like to ride it so much my father gave it to me» звучит так, будто любовь к велосипеду стала причиной подарка, и в рассказе о детстве лучше использовать прошедшее время. Сформулируйте естественную связь между подарком и тем, как часто вы катались; например, используйте «because» или «I used to».
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father gave me a bike for my sixth birthday, and I used to ride it almost every day.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Начните с прямого ответа, затем объясните причину. Уберите заполнители «uh» и обязательно завершите мысль: фраза «people in my country usually use» требует дополнения. Также можно сказать «the weather is too cold» вместо неестественного здесь «not warm enough for it» и уточнить, каким транспортом люди пользуются.
Ví dụ: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because the weather is often too cold for cycling. As a result, most people prefer to travel by car or public transport.
Ngữ pháp
× I like to ride it so much my father gave it to me for my 6th birthday.
✓ I liked to ride it so much my father gave it to me for my 6th birthday.
The student is describing a childhood experience and says that the bike was given to them in the past. Therefore, liked is more consistent than like. Use the past tense when describing a preference that motivated a past event.
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