Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike. My mother bring me to Bike Broad when I was a child. A very lucky it and it is my favorite thing.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I don't think my friends and my family are very like to go fishing and play basketball. So I don't think the bike is popular.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车,并注意使用过去时(如 *had*、*bought*)。“My mother bring me to Bike Broad”表达不清楚;如果想说妈妈买了自行车,可以说 *My mother bought me a bike*。最后补充一个具体细节,例如你骑车的地点或感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought me a small blue one for my birthday, and I loved riding it around our neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要紧扣自行车在你所在国家是否流行,不要用钓鱼和打篮球来推断。先明确表达观点,再给出相关理由或例子,例如自行车常用于通勤、锻炼,或当地是否有安全的自行车道。注意表达应为 *my friends and family don't really like...*,但本题应围绕骑自行车展开。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live near their workplaces. They are an affordable way to get around, and many people also ride them for exercise.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

问题询问的是你小时候的情况,应用一般过去时。这里应将 have 改为过去式 had。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× My mother bring me to Bike Broad when I was a child.

✓ My mother brought me to Bike Broad when I was a child.

句子中的时间状语 when I was a child 表示过去,因此动词 bring 应使用过去式 brought。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× A very lucky it and it is my favorite thing.

✓ I was very lucky to have it, and it was my favorite thing.

原句的 A very lucky it 缺少正确的主谓结构,不能构成完整句子。可改为 I was very lucky to have it,表达“我很幸运拥有它”。另外,句子描述的是童年经历,因此后半句也应使用过去时 was。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× I don't think my friends and my family are very like to go fishing and play basketball.

✓ I don't think my friends and my family really like to go fishing and play basketball.

like 在这里是表示“喜欢”的实义动词,前面不能加 are。可删去 are,并用 really 修饰 like。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Lucky— Fortunate; Providential
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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