Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike in my child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bags are popular in my country because very child umm. In their childhood will write back.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容直接,但时态和表达不自然。谈过去的童年经历时,应使用过去时“had”,并说“when I was a child”或“during my childhood”。可以补充一个具体细节,例如骑车的地点或感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed it.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 15.0

Gợi ý: 先准确回应问题,注意“bikes”是自行车,不是“bags”(包)。表达观点时可说“bikes are popular”,并用完整句子说明原因;“every child”后面应接“has”或“rides”,不要使用“write back”。避免停顿词,并加入具体例子让回答更清楚。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around. Many children ride them in parks or around their neighborhoods.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes, I have a bike in my child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

问题中的问句使用过去时“Did you have…?”,回答童年时的情况也应使用过去时。应将“have”改为“had”。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× Yes, I have a bike in my child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

“in my child”不能表达“在我小时候”。表示“当我还是个孩子时”应使用“when I was a child”。

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers(量词使用错误)

× Yes, I think bags are popular in my country because very child umm. In their childhood will write back.

✓ Yes, I think bags are popular in my country because every child, um, will write back during their childhood.

“very”表示“非常”,不能直接修饰“child”来表达“每个孩子”。这里应使用“every”,构成“every child”(每个孩子)。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× Yes, I think bags are popular in my country because very child umm. In their childhood will write back.

✓ Yes, I think bags are popular in my country because every child, um, will write back during their childhood.

“In their childhood will write back”缺少明确的主语,而且单独作为句子结构不完整。将“every child”放在谓语“will write back”前作主语,并把时间状语放在句末,可使句子结构完整。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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