Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, my parents didn't buy me a bike when I was little and honestly I don't how I don't know how to ride a bike right now either. That probably one of my most drawbacks in my life. I will learn how to ride a bike in the future perhaps.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I believe bikes are very popular in my country cause, uh, in the street there are many bike riders every day I saw and I, I believe most of people when I, when they were little, their parents told them how to ride a bike. Uh, neighbors, friends.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再补充原因和未来计划。注意语法:应说“I don’t know how to ride a bike”和“That’s probably one of my biggest regrets”;避免重复“I don’t”,并用“so”或“as a result”连接想法。表达未来计划时可说“I hope to learn”。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents never bought me one. As a result, I still don’t know how to ride one. I hope to learn someday, since it would be a useful skill.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 开头回答明确,但后面的描述较零散,且有较多重复和填充词。用完整句说明你观察到的现象,并补充具体原因或例子;注意说“many people”而不是“most of people”,以及用“because”替代口语化的“cause”。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people riding them on the streets, especially in the mornings and evenings. Many people learn to ride when they’re young, usually with help from their parents or friends.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× I don't how I don't know how to ride a bike right now either.

✓ I don't know how to ride a bike right now either.

“I don't how”缺少动词“know”,而且后面又重复了“I don't know how”,导致句子结构不完整且重复。说话时可以删去错误的开头,保留完整表达:“I don't know how to...”。

23: Sentence without a verb(句子缺少动词)

× That probably one of my most drawbacks in my life.

✓ That is probably one of my biggest drawbacks in life.

句子缺少谓语动词。描述“那是……”时,需要在主语“That”和后面的表语之间加上系动词“is”。

25: Comparative and superlative errors(比较级和最高级错误)

× That probably one of my most drawbacks in my life.

✓ That is probably one of my biggest drawbacks in life.

“one of my”后面应接名词复数,但“most”不能直接这样修饰“drawbacks”。这里可用最高级形容词“biggest”修饰“drawbacks”,构成“one of my biggest drawbacks”。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes, I believe bikes are very popular in my country cause, uh, in the street there are many bike riders every day I saw and I, I believe most of people when I, when they were little, their parents told them how to ride a bike.

✓ Yes, I believe bikes are very popular in my country because I see many bike riders on the streets every day, and I believe most people were taught how to ride a bike by their parents when they were little.

“every day”表示经常发生的情况,因此应使用一般现在时“see”,而不是表示过去某一次经历的“saw”。谈论人们小时候学骑车时,使用过去时“were taught”与“when they were little”保持一致。

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers(数量词使用错误)

× Yes, I believe bikes are very popular in my country cause, uh, in the street there are many bike riders every day I saw and I, I believe most of people when I, when they were little, their parents told them how to ride a bike.

✓ Yes, I believe bikes are very popular in my country because I see many bike riders on the streets every day, and I believe most people were taught how to ride a bike by their parents when they were little.

“most of”后面通常需要有限定词,例如“most of the people”。如果后面直接接泛指的复数名词,应说“most people”,不能说“most of people”。

23: Sentence without a verb(句子缺少动词)

× Uh, neighbors, friends.

✓ Neighbors and friends may have taught them as well.

原句只有名词,没有谓语动词,因此不是完整句子。可以补上动词,并将邻居和朋友作为句子的主语,例如“Neighbors and friends may have taught them as well.”

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Little— Short; Young; Brief; Minor
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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