Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I did. It was a bright orange bike that I used to ride with my friends whenever we were free and it had a distinctive eye kitchen view which always made me stand out in the group. I remember taking great care of it, cleaning it every weekend so it would stay shiny and look new.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. When I go to the park I often see many people riding bikes and the government has introduced a public bike sharing scheme and improved cycling dance to encourage cycling because it is healthy and environmentally friendly.
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Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答直接，细节也比较具体，例如自行车的颜色、和朋友骑车以及每周清洁。不过，“a distinctive eye kitchen view”表达不自然，可能是想说“a distinctive, eye-catching design”。建议先用简短句子介绍自行车，再补充一个回忆；注意句子之间用标点分开，避免信息堆在同一句里。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a bright orange bike with a distinctive, eye-catching design, so it was easy to spot in a group. I often rode it with my friends in our free time, and I used to clean it every weekend to keep it shiny.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 74.0Gợi ý: 回答切题，也提到了公园里的观察、共享单车政策以及骑车的益处，内容较充实。建议把较长的第二句拆开，并将“cycling dance”改为更合适的表达，如“cycling lanes”或“cycling infrastructure”。可以用“also”和“because”连接观点与理由，使表达更清晰自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people cycling in parks, and many cities have introduced bike-sharing schemes. The government has also improved cycling infrastructure, such as adding more bike lanes, because cycling is healthy and environmentally friendly.
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