Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yeah definitely my parents bought me a bright yellow bicycle for my fifth birthday and I learned to ride it within a few weeks. I rode it nearly every day around our neighborhood and felt so proud once I could go without training wheels.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, for sure. I think that bikes are popular in China, especially in Huh. People go to work every day by e bike I think so.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 92.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且内容具体,提到了自行车的颜色、收到的时间、学会骑车的过程和当时的感受,细节丰富。建议在“Yeah, definitely”后加逗号,并把长句适当拆分,让表达更清晰自然。整体已经很好,不需要再增加太多内容。
Ví dụ: Yeah, definitely. My parents bought me a bright yellow bike for my fifth birthday, and I learned to ride it within a few weeks. I rode it around our neighborhood almost every day, and I felt really proud when I could ride without training wheels.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: 开头直接回答了问题,但“especially in Huh”表达不清楚,请确认想表达的地点,并使用准确的地名;“by e bike”应写作“by e-bike”或改成“ride e-bikes”。建议补充一个具体原因,例如电动自行车方便通勤,并删除句末不自然的“I think so”。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Bikes are popular in China, especially in large cities. Many people ride e-bikes to work because they are convenient and can help them avoid traffic.
× People go to work every day by e bike I think so.
✓ I think people go to work by e-bike every day.
原句把两个完整意思直接连在一起,缺少恰当的连接方式,句子结构不够清晰。可以把“I think”放在主句开头,再用宾语从句表达后面的看法。“e-bike”通常用连字符连接。