Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
As I did I loved riding
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, it is very popular and welcomed in China. There are lot of people there are lots of people addicted to it. Is this my favorite And my favorite sport is writing.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答“有”或“没有”,再补充一个具体细节。原句“As I did”表达不自然,建议用“Yes, I did”开头;“riding”最好说明是骑自行车。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about six, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答时注意主谓一致:bikes是复数,应使用“They are”。“welcomed”和“addicted to it”在这里不自然,可改为“popular”或“widely used”。删去重复和不完整的句子,并用一个具体理由或例子展开;注意“骑行”是“cycling”,不是“writing”。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially in large cities. Many people use shared bikes to travel short distances because they are convenient and affordable. I also enjoy cycling in my free time.
× There are lot of people
✓ There are a lot of people
“People”是可数名词复数。表示“许多”时,可以说“a lot of people”或“lots of people”;不能直接说“lot of people”。
× There are lots of people addicted to it.
✓ There are lots of people addicted to them.
这里的“it”指前文的“bikes”,而“bikes”是复数名词,因此应使用复数代词“them”。