Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear past-tense sentence, such as “Yes, I did.” Use “when I was a child” rather than “when I will a tie,” and avoid adding a memory unless you can explain it clearly. Give one specific detail about how you used the bike.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood. It gave me a lot of freedom to visit my friends.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and use the correct words: “bikes,” “a convenient way to get around,” and “many people.” Avoid repeating “transportation” and clarify how bikes are used. Add a specific example, such as commuting or short trips.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re a convenient and affordable way to get around. Many people use them for short trips or to commute to work, especially in busy cities.

× When I will a tie, I used to have a bike and I was really happy and to go around with my own bicycle, but I have a terrible memory that was I dive into a drum about.

✓ When I was a child, I used to have a bike, and I was really happy to ride around on my own bicycle. But I have a terrible memory of diving into a drum.

The question asks about your childhood, so use the past tense was rather than will. Use When I was a child to express the time clearly. When answering questions about past experiences, check that the verbs describing those experiences are in the past tense.

× When I will a tie, I used to have a bike and I was really happy and to go around with my own bicycle, but I have a terrible memory that was I dive into a drum about.

✓ When I was a child, I used to have a bike, and I was really happy to ride around on my own bicycle. But I have a terrible memory of diving into a drum.

The phrase I was really happy and to go around joins two structures that do not fit together. Say I was really happy to ride around. The phrase that was I dive is also not structured correctly; I have a memory of diving gives the idea a grammatical structure. Use a complete, correctly connected clause or phrase.

× When I will a tie, I used to have a bike and I was really happy and to go around with my own bicycle, but I have a terrible memory that was I dive into a drum about.

✓ When I was a child, I used to have a bike, and I was really happy to ride around on my own bicycle. But I have a terrible memory of diving into a drum.

After the preposition of, use a verb ending in -ing. Therefore, say a memory of diving, not a memory of dive. Remember that verbs following prepositions generally take the -ing form.

× I will say yes to these questions because bites are easier transportations transportation so most visit people can use the bike to go from here and there and also other vehicles.

✓ I would say yes because bikes are an easier means of transportation, so most people can use them to get from place to place instead of using other vehicles.

Transportation is generally an uncountable noun in this meaning, so it should not be made plural as transportations. A natural grammatical phrase is a means of transportation. Use singular and plural forms according to whether a noun is countable.

× I will say yes to these questions because bites are easier transportations transportation so most visit people can use the bike to go from here and there and also other vehicles.

✓ I would say yes because bikes are an easier means of transportation, so most people can use them to get from place to place instead of using other vehicles.

The original ending does not clearly connect using bikes with other vehicles. The corrected version uses instead of using other vehicles to show the comparison clearly. Use parallel structures when comparing two ways of doing something.