Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bike when I was five years old. I very like this bike because I can take right here to everywhere I want to go and I always play with and I always
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, the bags are very popular in my country. Many people ride it, go to work or go to school or go to play and so many people learn to learn right back at when they are young, when they are
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答是否拥有自行车,并使用过去时,例如“I had a bike”。注意语法搭配:用“really liked”而不是“very like”,用“ride it”而不是“take right”。可以补充一两个具体细节,比如自行车的颜色、骑车的地点或它带给你的感受;避免重复,并用完整句子结束回答。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was five. It was a small red bike, and I really enjoyed riding it around my neighbourhood. It gave me a sense of freedom because I could visit my friends nearby.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 开头要直接回答自行车是否受欢迎,并注意题目中的“bikes”是自行车,不是“bags”。描述多人使用时,用“many people ride them”;可以具体说明人们骑车通勤、上学或锻炼。删去重复的“go to”和“learn to learn”,并补全句子,让回答简洁、连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school, especially in cities with busy traffic. Also, children often learn to ride bikes when they are young.
× Yes, I have a bike when I was five years old.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was five years old.
句子描述的是五岁时的经历,属于过去的时间,因此 have 应改为过去式 had。回答过去发生的事情时,注意使用过去时态。
× I very like this bike.
✓ I really liked this bike.
very 通常不能直接修饰动词 like。表达“非常喜欢”时,应使用 really like;由于这里谈论的是童年时的自行车,like 也应使用过去式 liked。
× I can take right here to everywhere I want to go and I always play with.
✓ I could take it everywhere I wanted to go, and I always played with it.
take 后缺少指代自行车的宾语代词 it;play with 后也需要宾语代词 it。谈论过去的经历时,could、wanted 和 played 与过去时间保持一致。
× Many people ride it.
✓ Many people ride them.
前文的主语是复数 bikes,因此代词应使用复数 them,而不能使用单数 it。
× Many people learn to learn right back at when they are young.
✓ Many people learn to ride a bike when they are young.
表示“在他们年幼时”应直接使用 when they are young,不需要在 when 前加介词 at。建议避免在时间从句前重复添加介词,并检查句子中重复或不清楚的表达。