Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I used to have a bike but it wasn't really mine. It was my sister's bike because she was riding a bike so good but I was afraid of it so it was hers and

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think so yeah but not not in all the area in my country for example here in my in my hometown I'm going to say that people not often use a bike as much as they use they're using their car or the motorbike

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then explain the situation in one or two complete sentences. Use “rode a bike well” rather than “was riding a bike so good,” and avoid ending with “and,” which leaves your answer unfinished. You could also clarify that you sometimes borrowed your sister’s bike.

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes rode a bike when I was a child, although it belonged to my sister. She was much more confident on it, but I was a little afraid of falling. I only borrowed it occasionally.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear overall answer before adding a specific example. Avoid repeating words such as “not” and “my,” and say “not in every area” or “not everywhere.” Correct the comparison to “people don’t use bikes as often as cars or motorbikes,” and briefly explain where bikes are more or less common.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are popular in some parts of my country, but their popularity varies by area. In my hometown, for example, people tend to travel by car or motorbike because these options are more convenient. However, cycling is more common in places with dedicated bike lanes.

Ngữ pháp

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It was my sister's bike because she was riding a bike so good.

✓ It was my sister's bike because she rode a bike so well.

Good is an adjective, but the sentence needs an adverb to describe how she rode. Use well after the verb rode. The simple past rode also fits the past-time context.

1: Singular and plural issue

× I think so, yeah, but not not in all the area in my country.

✓ I think so, yeah, but not in all areas of my country.

All refers to more than one area here, so use the plural noun areas. The repeated not is a speech disfluency and has been removed.

6: Present tense issue

× People not often use a bike as much as they use they're using their car or the motorbike.

✓ People don't often use bikes as much as they use cars or motorbikes.

To make a negative statement in the present simple, use do not or don't before the base verb: people don't use. Avoid combining use with are using in this comparison; keep the present-simple form use throughout.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× They use they're using their car or the motorbike.

✓ They use their cars or motorbikes.

They're means they are, whereas their is the possessive pronoun needed before car. Use their to show that the cars belong to the people being discussed.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Afraid— Frightened; Reluctant
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
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