Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Blue color white. I used to write for, uh, relaxation when I came back from school, and I could also learn from cycling. I I. I used to go to the park through uh roads and it also build my confidence in writing the.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country because many children start using bicycles from very small is and they used for their fun activities when they can go to many places for like for small, small shopping when their parents can't go and it's also very essential.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly first, and keep your answer focused on your childhood bike rather than writing. Clarify the bike’s color and describe one specific way you used it. Use complete sentences and avoid unfinished phrases and repeated words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a blue-and-white bike when I was a child. I often rode it to the park after school, and cycling helped me become more confident and independent.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Your main idea and reasons are relevant, but some phrases are unclear, such as “from very small” and “small, small shopping.” Use “from a young age” and explain that children use bikes for fun and short trips. Organize the answer into clear sentences and avoid repeating words.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Many learn to ride from a young age because cycling is fun and gives them a convenient way to make short trips, such as going to a nearby shop.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence without a verb

× Blue color white.

✓ It was blue and white.

The original phrase has no verb, so it is a sentence fragment. Add the verb was to make a complete answer describing the bike’s color. A natural pattern is: It was [color].

Past tense issue

× I used to go to the park through uh roads and it also build my confidence in writing the.

✓ I used to go to the park through roads, and it also built my confidence in writing.

The speaker is describing past experiences, so build should be in the past tense: built. The final the is left without a noun, so it should be omitted if the thought is complete there.

Article errors

× Many children start using bicycles from very small is.

✓ Many children start using bicycles from a very young age.

The phrase needs a noun after the adjective, and age is the natural noun in this expression. Use the article a in the phrase from a very young age.

Incorrect passive voice

× They used for their fun activities.

✓ They are used for fun activities.

If they refers to bicycles, the bicycles receive the action of being used, so the passive form is needed. In the present tense, form it with are + used.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Fun— Merriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Small— Little; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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