Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 질문에 직접 답한 점은 좋지만, 두 번째 문장의 **“nearby my house”**는 **“near my house”** 또는 **“nearby”**로 고쳐야 자연스럽습니다. **“Uh, that experience. Very enjoyable and memorable.”**은 완전한 문장이 아니므로 한 문장으로 연결하세요. 아버지와 어디에서 탔는지, 왜 기억에 남는지 구체적인 내용을 덧붙이면 답변이 더 풍부해집니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I often rode my bike with my father on the quiet streets near our house. He taught me how to ride safely, so those afternoons were both fun and memorable.

Gợi ý: 질문에 대한 의견과 자전거를 타는 상황을 제시한 점은 좋습니다. 다만 **“I think yes”**보다 **“Yes, I think so”**, **“enjoy to ride”**보다 **“enjoy riding”**이 자연스럽습니다. 또한 **“in my country”** 뒤에 쉼표를 넣고, 자전거가 인기 있는 이유나 이용하는 사람들의 예를 구체적으로 덧붙이세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many children ride them with their friends for fun, while some students cycle to school because it is convenient. In smaller towns, people also use bikes to get around.

× I usually rode the bike with my father nearby my house.

✓ I usually rode the bike with my father near my house.

Nearby is an adverb and is not normally followed directly by a noun phrase. Use the preposition near before my house.

× That experience. Very enjoyable and memorable.

✓ That experience was very enjoyable and memorable.

The original is a sentence fragment because it has no main verb. Add was to link the subject that experience to the description very enjoyable and memorable.

× People enjoy to ride a bike when they play with their friends.

✓ People enjoy riding a bike when they play with their friends.

The verb enjoy is followed by a gerund, or verb ending in -ing, not an infinitive with to. Use enjoy riding.