Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yeah, my mother bought a bike for me when I was three years ago because my best friends had a bike, so I wanted to have on bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I think it is because our country is eco friendly country. So by not produce more emissions is friendly for environment.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再补充原因。注意表达年龄时说“when I was three years old”,不能说“when I was three years ago”;“想要一辆自行车”可说“wanted one”或“wanted a bike”。另外,“my best friends”若指一个朋友,应改为“my best friend”,并避免重复使用“bike”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a bike when I was three years old because my best friend had one, and I wanted to ride with them.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 43.0

Gợi ý: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎,再用一个具体理由支持观点。注意“环保”可说“environmentally friendly”;“by not produce”应改为“by not producing”或换成更自然的句子;“the environment”前需要加定冠词。可具体提到骑自行车能减少汽车尾气,避免把“国家环保”作为缺少解释的笼统理由。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. They are an environmentally friendly way to travel, especially for short journeys, because cycling helps reduce traffic and air pollution.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× Yeah, my mother bought a bike for me when I was three years ago because my best friends had a bike, so I wanted to have on bike.

✓ Yeah, my mother bought a bike for me when I was three years old because my best friends had a bike, so I wanted to have a bike.

表达年龄时应说“when I was three years old”,不能把“was three”与表示“……以前”的“ago”连用。记住:“three years old”表示年龄,“three years ago”表示某事发生在三年前。

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× Yeah, my mother bought a bike for me when I was three years ago because my best friends had a bike, so I wanted to have on bike.

✓ Yeah, my mother bought a bike for me when I was three years old because my best friends had a bike, so I wanted to have a bike.

“on bike”中的“on”不能用作这里的冠词。单数可数名词“bike”前需要冠词,因此应说“a bike”。

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× Yeah, I think it is because our country is eco friendly country.

✓ Yeah, I think it is because our country is an eco-friendly country.

“country”是单数可数名词,前面需要冠词。“eco-friendly”以元音音素开头,因此使用“an”:an eco-friendly country。

8: Verb + -ing form(动词的 -ing 形式)

× So by not produce more emissions is friendly for environment.

✓ So, by not producing more emissions, cycling is friendly to the environment.

介词“by”后面的动词应使用 -ing 形式,所以“produce”应改为“producing”。可以记住结构“by + 动词-ing”,表示“通过做某事”。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× So by not produce more emissions is friendly for environment.

✓ So, by not producing more emissions, cycling is friendly to the environment.

原句以“by not produce more emissions”开头,但没有明确说明是谁或什么不排放,导致句子结构不完整。补上主语“cycling”,并让它与前面的方式状语对应,句子就完整了。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× So by not produce more emissions is friendly for environment.

✓ So, by not producing more emissions, cycling is friendly to the environment.

表达“对环境友好”时,通常使用“friendly to the environment”,而不是“friendly for environment”。请记住常见搭配“be friendly to”。

17: Incorrect use of the definite article(定冠词使用错误)

× So by not produce more emissions is friendly for environment.

✓ So, by not producing more emissions, cycling is friendly to the environment.

“environment”在这里指我们共同生活的自然环境,通常说“the environment”。在类似语境中,记得在“environment”前加定冠词“the”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Best— Finest; To the highest standard
Friendly— Affable; Amicable; Favorable; Compatible
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