Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, actually I have a bike when I was a child but this is numb. Use my money The bike is my sister she gave me this bike

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I don't know because I'm living in Chongqing. Chongqing is a modern city. It's bike in Cheng is not useful. But in other city, maybe Chengdu is they have so many and sheer bike

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 你直接回答了问题,也提到了自行车是姐姐给的,但时态和句子结构错误较多,后半部分意思不清楚。回忆童年时用一般过去时,例如“had”;说明自行车是谁送的时,可以说“my sister gave it to me”。建议按“直接回答+补充一两个具体细节”的顺序组织答案,并确保表达不超过5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My sister gave me a bike when I was about eight. I used it to ride around our neighborhood, and I really enjoyed it.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 你尝试比较重庆和成都,这是有帮助的具体思路,但开头说“I don't know”后又给出判断,回答不够明确。建议先直接回答自行车在中国是否受欢迎,再用重庆地形起伏较大、成都共享单车较常见等细节解释比较;注意使用复数形式“bikes”,并说“in other cities”和“there are many shared bikes”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are popular in many parts of China, especially shared bikes. However, they may be less convenient in Chongqing because the city is very hilly. In Chengdu, for example, you can often see people using shared bikes for short trips.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes, actually I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, actually, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子中的“when I was a child”表示过去的时间,因此“have”也应使用过去式“had”,以保持时态一致。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× The bike is my sister she gave me this bike.

✓ The bike was from my sister; she gave me this bike.

原句把两个完整句子直接连接在一起,缺少恰当的连接方式;而“The bike is my sister”也不能表达自行车来自姐姐的意思。可以用分号连接两个句子,并说“The bike was from my sister”。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数错误)

× It's bike in Cheng is not useful.

✓ Bikes in Chongqing are not useful.

这里是在泛指自行车,通常用复数“bikes”;复数主语应搭配“are”。原句中的“It's bike”不能正确表达这个意思。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数错误)

× But in other city, maybe Chengdu is they have so many and sheer bike.

✓ But in other cities, maybe in Chengdu, they have so many shared bikes.

“other”后面指多个城市时,应使用复数“cities”;“many”后面要接可数名词复数,因此应说“many shared bikes”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Modern— Present-day; Fashionable
Useful— Functional; Beneficial
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