Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I were a child when I was a child and I have and I have many great memories with my parents when I had I had this bike

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bike shark popular in my country because I go biking every week and when I go biking I see very many people are riding a bike

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then add one clear and specific detail. Avoid repeating phrases, and use the correct past-tense form: “I was,” not “I were.” You could mention what you did with the bike or a memory involving your parents.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my parents in the park, and those trips are some of my favorite childhood memories.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: State your opinion clearly, then support it with your observation. Use the natural phrase “bikes are popular” and say “many people ride bikes” rather than “very many people are riding a bike.” A linking word such as “because” helps connect your reason to your opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because I go cycling every week and see many people riding along the paths. They seem to use bikes for both exercise and getting around.

Ngữ pháp

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes, I had a bike when I were a child when I was a child and I have and I have many great memories with my parents when I had I had this bike

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I have many great memories with my parents from when I had this bike.

The subject I takes was, not were, in the past tense. The repeated phrases appear to be speech disfluencies, so they have been removed for clarity. Use I was when talking about yourself in the past.

1: Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I think bike shark popular in my country because I go biking every week and when I go biking I see very many people are riding a bike

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because I go biking every week, and when I go biking, I see many people riding bikes.

When speaking about bikes in general, use the plural noun bikes. The phrase bike shark appears to be a transcription error; the context suggests bikes are. The correction also uses bikes to refer generally to what many people ride. Use plural nouns when making general statements about countable items.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I think bike shark popular in my country because I go biking every week and when I go biking I see very many people are riding a bike

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because I go biking every week, and when I go biking, I see many people riding bikes.

After see, the natural structure here is see + object + verb ending in -ing: I see many people riding bikes. Alternatively, you could say I see that many people are riding bikes. Avoid combining see directly with a clause that has its own are without using that.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Great— Considerable; Large; Prominent; Magnificent; Enthusiastic
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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