Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike umm in my childhood, well it was a green a children bike from my mother Umm, and at the time she was very busy with her work so I had to ride to the school by myself umm.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, to some degree the worst umm, and in my country, there is a advanced tour, uh, vehicle named city bicycle and it could be rent for free uh, to help reduce umm, uh, your frequency of using cars or some other vehicles that could produce the greenhouse gas.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Answer in the past tense because you are talking about your childhood: say “I had” and “I rode.” Use the natural phrase “a green children’s bike” or “a green bike for children.” You already include a relevant detail about your mother and riding to school, so connect those ideas clearly and avoid fillers such as “umm.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a small green bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me, and because she was often busy with work, I rode it to school by myself.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear response to the question first, such as “Yes, they’re quite popular, especially in cities.” The phrase “to some degree the worst” is unclear, and “advanced tour vehicle” does not express your meaning; use “a public bike-sharing scheme” instead. Correct “it could be rent” to “they can be rented,” and explain briefly how this encourages people to use fewer cars.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many places have public bike-sharing schemes, and the bikes can often be rented for a low fee or even used for free. They’re convenient for short journeys and help reduce car use and greenhouse-gas emissions.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× I have a bike ... in my childhood

✓ I had a bike in my childhood.

The question asks about your childhood, a finished period in the past, so use the past-tense form had rather than have.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× in my childhood

✓ during my childhood

During is more natural when referring to something that happened throughout a period of life. You can also say when I was a child.

22: Article errors

× a green a children bike

✓ a green children's bike

Use one article, a, before the adjective and noun phrase. Children's is the possessive form used to describe a bike intended for or belonging to a child.

17: Incorrect use of the definite article

× ride to the school

✓ ride to school

When school refers to its usual function as a place of education, it generally does not take the definite article. Say ride to school.

22: Article errors

× there is a advanced ... vehicle

✓ there is an advanced ... vehicle

Use an before a word that begins with a vowel sound. Advanced begins with a vowel sound, so the correct phrase is an advanced vehicle.

21: Incorrect passive voice

× it could be rent for free

✓ it could be rented for free

The sentence uses a passive construction after could be. Passive constructions require a past participle, so use rented rather than rent.

1: Singular and plural issue

× the greenhouse gas

✓ greenhouse gases

The statement refers generally to emissions from cars and other vehicles, so the plural greenhouse gases is more appropriate. Do not use the before a general plural noun.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Advanced— Higher-level
Busy— Occupied; Unavailable; Hectic
Free— Without charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
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