Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I don't have a bike because I am both in a poor family. My parents don't have money buy a buy give me.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. I live in Nanning where have many bike.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答过去的情况,并注意使用过去时:用 “I didn’t have” 而不是 “I don’t have”。“I am both in a poor family” 表达不自然,可改为 “My family was quite poor”。说明父母当时买不起自行车即可;注意说 “couldn’t afford to buy me a bike”,并用 because 衔接原因。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family was quite poor, so my parents couldn’t afford to buy me one.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,也提供了南宁这一具体信息。请注意语法:“where have many bike” 应改为 “where there are many bikes”。可以再补充一个具体细节,例如人们骑自行车通勤或使用共享单车,让答案更充分;注意 bikes 要用复数。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I live in Nanning, where there are many shared bikes. People often use them to get around the city, especially for short trips.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× No, I don't have a bike because I am both in a poor family.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because I was from a poor family.

问题背景是询问你小时候的情况,因此应使用过去时。将“don't have”改为“didn't have”,将“am”改为“was”。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× My parents don't have money buy a buy give me.

✓ My parents didn't have money to buy a bike for me.

这里描述的是小时候的情况,应使用过去时,所以将“don't have”改为“didn't have”。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× My parents don't have money buy a buy give me.

✓ My parents didn't have money to buy a bike for me.

表达“有钱做某事”时,应使用“have money to do something”的结构;“买一辆自行车给我”可以说“buy a bike for me”。原句中的“money buy a buy give me”结构不完整且不正确。

3: There be issue(There be 句型错误)

× I live in Nanning where have many bike.

✓ I live in Nanning, where there are many bikes.

表达某地“有”某物时,应使用“There be”结构。这里可写成“where there are many bikes”,不能省略“there”。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数错误)

× I live in Nanning where have many bike.

✓ I live in Nanning, where there are many bikes.

“many”后面应接可数名词复数,因此“bike”应改为“bikes”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Poor— Poverty-stricken; Substandard; Meager; Unproductive; Deficient in
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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