Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have, but I have bike phobia because I in my childhood I traveling, travelling in
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
No, but have a lecture parade bicycle is very popular in my culture German have everyone
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答没有完整表达清楚。用过去时回答童年经历:有就说“Yes, I did”,没有就说“No, I didn’t”。“bike phobia”不太自然,可改成“I was afraid of riding a bike”。接着用一个具体原因或经历补充,并确保句子完整。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did, but I was afraid of riding a bike. When I was little, I fell off one and hurt my knee, so I rarely rode it after that.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,并明确说明你所在的国家或地区;目前“No”与后面“bicycle is very popular”相矛盾,后半句也难以理解。可以用“because”或“for example”补充一个具体原因或例子。注意使用完整句子,并检查主谓一致和冠词。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They are an affordable way to get around, and many people use them to commute or exercise.
× Yes, I have, but I have bike phobia because I in my childhood I traveling, travelling in
✓ Yes, I did, but I have a phobia of bikes because I traveled by bike when I was a child.
问题问的是你小时候是否有自行车,因此回答应使用过去时助动词 did,而不是现在时 have。描述小时候发生的事情也应使用过去时 traveled。回答现在仍然有恐惧症,所以 have a phobia 使用现在时是正确的。
× Yes, I have, but I have bike phobia because I in my childhood I traveling, travelling in
✓ Yes, I did, but I have a phobia of bikes because I traveled by bike when I was a child.
可数名词 phobia 前需要限定词。这里可说 a phobia of bikes。注意,have a phobia 使用现在时,表示目前仍有这种恐惧。
× Yes, I have, but I have bike phobia because I in my childhood I traveling, travelling in
✓ Yes, I did, but I have a phobia of bikes because I traveled by bike when I was a child.
原句后半部分“I in my childhood I traveling...”语序不正确,而且句子没有完整表达。可以将时间状语放在从句中,并使用完整的主语和谓语,例如:I traveled by bike when I was a child。
× No, but have a lecture parade bicycle is very popular in my culture German have everyone
✓ No, but a bicycle parade is very popular in my culture. In Germany, everyone has one.
原句中“have a lecture parade bicycle is...”缺少清晰的句子结构,名词短语也排列混乱。这里按“自行车游行在我的文化中很受欢迎”理解,将其改为完整句子;“German have everyone”结构也不完整,因此将其整理为“In Germany, everyone has one”。原文意思不够清楚,以上修改是根据上下文作出的合理推断。
× No, but have a lecture parade bicycle is very popular in my culture German have everyone
✓ No, but a bicycle parade is very popular in my culture. In Germany, everyone has one.
everyone 虽然表示多人,但语法上作单数主语,因此一般现在时应使用 has,而不是 have。