Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

When I was a child, my parents bought it for my 7th birthday and I used to ride around the neighborhood every afternoon because it made me feel free and proud.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Silly shoe yes, but it's a popular in my country because some of the rural places still they're adults also riding a bike and children's they are riding in their neighborhood.

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 82.0

Gợi ý: You answer the question directly and give a relevant reason. To make the response more natural, replace “it” with “a bike” when you first mention it, and consider adding one specific detail about where you rode or what you enjoyed. Keep the answer concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike as a child. My parents bought me one for my seventh birthday, and I rode it around my neighborhood most afternoons. I loved exploring the local streets because it made me feel independent.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Your main idea is understandable, but the opening phrase is unclear, and there are several grammar errors. Start with a direct answer such as “Yes, they are.” Use “popular” without “a,” and say “in rural areas, adults still ride bikes” and “children ride them around their neighborhoods.” Add a clear reason or example to develop your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in rural areas. Many adults use them for short trips, while children often ride them around their neighborhoods for fun. They are convenient and inexpensive, so they remain a practical choice.

Ngữ pháp

22: Article errors

× Silly shoe yes, but it's a popular in my country because some of the rural places still they're adults also riding a bike and children's they are riding in their neighborhood.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country. In some rural areas, adults still ride bikes, and children ride them in their neighborhoods.

The phrase 'a popular' is incorrect because 'popular' is an adjective and is not followed by a singular noun. Remove the article and use 'bikes are popular.'

26: Sentence structure errors

× Silly shoe yes, but it's a popular in my country because some of the rural places still they're adults also riding a bike and children's they are riding in their neighborhood.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country. In some rural areas, adults still ride bikes, and children ride them in their neighborhoods.

The clause 'they're adults also riding' has an unnecessary subject and lacks a suitable verb structure. The phrase 'children's they are riding' also has a redundant subject and incorrectly uses the possessive form 'children's.' Use clear clauses with a subject and verb, such as 'adults still ride bikes' and 'children ride them.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Free— Without charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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