Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Of course I have and my bike is pink it looks like a princess ride

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Not really, and my classmates always get scrule on foot.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,也提供了自行车颜色这一细节。注意题目问的是过去的经历,因此应使用过去时:将“have”改为“had”,将“is”改为“was”。“a princess ride”表达不自然,可以说“a princess’s bike”或“fit for a princess”。建议用完整句子表达,并用连接词补充感受或用途。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a pink bike that looked like a princess’s bike, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 你直接表达了观点,并尝试用同学的情况举例,但“get scrule on foot”不清楚且不符合英语习惯。如果想表达“步行上学”,可以说“go to school on foot”或“walk to school”。回答国家情况时,可以先直接表明观点,再用同学的例子说明,并补充一个简短原因。

Ví dụ: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, most of my classmates walk to school instead of cycling, probably because they live nearby.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Of course I have and my bike is pink it looks like a princess ride

✓ Of course I did, and my bike was pink. It looked like a princess ride.

问题问的是过去(“Did you have…?”),所以回答和描述童年时的自行车也应使用一般过去时。这里应将 “I have” 改为 “I did”,将 “is” 改为 “was”,将 “looks” 改为 “looked”。

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