Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then add one or two specific details. Use the more natural phrase “one of my most memorable childhood experiences” instead of “one of the most memorable experiences I could have growing up.” Avoid repeating “feeling” and using both “bike” and “cycle”; “ride without training wheels” is enough. You could also replace “I won't forget in my life” with “I’ll never forget.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My dad helped me learn to ride, and we spent a lot of time practising together. I still remember how excited I felt when I finally rode without training wheels. It’s one of my fondest childhood memories.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and support it with a concise, specific reason. Say “In India” rather than “I’m from the country India.” Clarify whether you mean bicycles, since “bikes” can also mean motorcycles, and simplify the explanation about road space. Avoid repeating that bikes are not popular in both the opening and closing sentences.

Ví dụ: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in India, especially in busy cities. Many roads have little space for cycling, and traffic can make it feel unsafe. As a result, people often choose public transport or motorbikes instead.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and it was one of the most memorable experiences I could have growing up.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and it was one of the most memorable experiences I had growing up.

Could have suggests a possible experience rather than an experience that actually happened. Since the student is describing a real childhood memory, use the past-tense verb had.

× I'm from the country India and I think the bikes are not that popular because the roads are constructed in such a way that there's not enough space for bikes and people to walk on the sidewalks and cars.

✓ I'm from India, and I think the bikes are not that popular because the roads are constructed in such a way that there's not enough space for bikes and people to walk on the sidewalks and cars.

Country names such as India are generally used without the definite article the. Say I'm from India, not I'm from the country India.

× I'm from the country India and I think the bikes are not that popular because the roads are constructed in such a way that there's not enough space for bikes and people to walk on the sidewalks and cars.

✓ I'm from the country India and I think bikes are not that popular because the roads are constructed in such a way that there's not enough space for bikes and people to walk on the sidewalks and cars.

When referring to bikes in general, do not use the before the plural noun. Use bikes rather than the bikes.

× I'm from the country India and I think the bikes are not that popular because the roads are constructed in such a way that there's not enough space for bikes and people to walk on the sidewalks and cars.

✓ I'm from the country India, and I think the bikes are not that popular because the roads are constructed in such a way that there's not enough space for bikes, for people to walk on sidewalks, and for cars.

The original list combines different grammatical forms: for bikes, people to walk on the sidewalks, and cars. Make the items parallel by repeating for and using matching phrases. This makes clear that the roads lack space for bikes, pedestrians, and cars.