Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes when I was seven years old I got my first bike

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, it will make the environment better.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,并用七岁时买到第一辆自行车补充了具体信息。建议在“Yes”后加逗号,并用更自然的表达连接年龄和经历;还可以补充一项细节,例如自行车的颜色或你骑车时的感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven. It was a small red bike, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 你表达了支持骑自行车的态度,也提到了环保理由,但没有清楚说明自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎。“it”指代不够明确,而且“will make”不太适合描述普遍事实。建议直接回答受欢迎程度,再用现在时说明原因,并补充一个具体例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in crowded cities. Many people use them for short trips because they are convenient and produce no air pollution.

Ngữ pháp

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× Yes, it will make the environment better.

✓ Yes, they make the environment better.

“Bikes”是复数名词,因此应使用复数代词“they”,不能用单数代词“it”。建议先确认代词指代的名词是单数还是复数,并保持一致。

7: Future tense issue(将来时错误)

× Yes, it will make the environment better.

✓ Yes, they make the environment better.

这里是在陈述自行车通常对环境的影响,属于一般事实,应使用一般现在时“make”,而不是表示将来的“will make”。回答有关普遍情况的问题时,通常使用一般现在时。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Better— Superior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
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