Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
What can I say, I had a bag.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, it's popular, uh, especially when working time, uh, because. Most people by bike for work.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 5.0Gợi ý: 回答没有回应是否小时候有自行车,且“ I had a bag”与问题无关。先直接回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”,再补充一两句具体信息,例如自行车的颜色、使用场景或学骑车的经历。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 你表达了自行车受欢迎的观点,也尝试说明通勤原因,但句子不完整,且“Most people by bike”缺少谓语;“when working time”也不自然。可以说“Bikes are popular, especially among people who commute to work”,然后补充具体原因或例子,并减少填充词。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among people who commute to work. They are an affordable and convenient way to get around, particularly in busy cities.
× Yes, it's popular.
✓ Yes, they're popular.
这里的“it”指代复数名词“bikes”,代词应使用复数形式“they”,因此相应地将“it's”改为“they're”。
× especially when working time
✓ especially during working hours
表示“在工作时间期间”时,应使用介词“during”,而不是“when”。此外,“working hours”是表达“工作时间”的自然说法。
× Most people by bike for work.
✓ Most people go to work by bike.
原句缺少谓语动词,因此不是完整句子。可以添加“go”,组成“go to work by bike”,表示“骑自行车去上班”。