Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车，例如用“I had a bike”或“I didn’t have a bike”。注意使用过去时；“bag”是“包”，这里应为“bike”。表达骑车时说“ride a bike”，不要说“a riding bike”。之后可以补充自行车的用途或一个具体回忆。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school, which was a fun way to exercise and relax.

Gợi ý: 开头直接回答自行车是否受欢迎，并注意“bike”不能写成“bag”；“popular”表示“受欢迎”，而“populated”通常形容某地人口密集。避免“in the between among”等重复表达。说明具体人群和原因时，可用“especially among teenagers”和“because they are convenient for getting to school”。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among teenagers. Many students ride them to school because they’re affordable and convenient. They’re also a practical way to get around in areas with heavy traffic.

× Well, I have a bag at my child, that's because I like doing some sports to relax myself, and I think a riding bike is a good way.

✓ Well, I had a bag at my child, that's because I like doing some sports to relax myself, and I think a riding bike is a good way.

问题问的是小时候的情况，属于过去时间，因此这里的 have 应改为过去式 had。注意：按照“只修改指定语法类型”的要求，暂不调整句中其他表达。

× Well, I have a bag at my child, that's because I like doing some sports to relax myself, and I think a riding bike is a good way.

✓ Well, I have a bag when I was a child, that's because I like doing some sports to relax myself, and I think a riding bike is a good way.

at my child 不能表示“在我小时候”。表达“当我还是个孩子时”应使用 when I was a child。

× Well, I have a bag at my child, that's because I like doing some sports to relax myself, and I think a riding bike is a good way.

✓ Well, I have a bag at my child. That's because I like doing some sports to relax myself, and I think a riding bike is a good way.

逗号不能直接连接两个可以独立成句的部分。这里可用句号将它们分开，或使用恰当的连接词。

× Well, I have a bag at my child, that's because I like doing some sports to relax myself, and I think a riding bike is a good way.

✓ Well, I have a bag at my child, that's because I like doing some sports to relax myself, and I think riding a bike is a good way.

这里 riding a bike 整体表示“骑自行车”这项活动，作 think 后面从句的主语时，应使用 riding a bike。不能在 riding 前加冠词 a；冠词应放在 bike 前。

× Yes, in my opinion, bags are really populated in my country, especially in the between among the teenagers.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, bags are really populated in my country, especially among the teenagers.

表示“在青少年当中”时，使用 among 即可。in the between among 是多余且错误的介词组合，应删去。

× That's because other teenagers should go to school, buy bike.

✓ That's because other teenagers should go to school, buy a bike.

bike 是可数名词单数，前面通常需要冠词或其他限定词，因此应在 bike 前加 a。

× That's very convenient way.

✓ That's a very convenient way.

way 是可数名词单数，前面缺少不定冠词 a。形容词 very convenient 位于冠词和名词之间。