Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I have a bike when I was a child, it was around, umm, 6 years old. I uh, learned, uh, in a very hard way because my father taught me. And after that I just try a little bit. I cannot.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Bite is a particularly, uh, especially good in my country. There are a lot of people, uh, riding a bike to work and school and we could rent a bike, uh, anywhere in the street.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答“有”或“没有”,并用过去时描述童年经历:将“I have”改为“I had”,“try”改为“tried”。“it was around 6 years old”不清楚是指你几岁还是自行车的年龄;如果指你当时的年龄,可以说“When I was about six”。最后的“I cannot”意思不完整,可以具体说明你后来是否学会骑车。减少“uh”等填充词,并用连接词组织补充细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about six, and my father taught me how to ride it. It was quite difficult at first, but I kept practising and eventually learned.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: 开头应直接回答“是的,很受欢迎”,并使用“bikes are popular”或“cycling is popular”,而不是“Bite is good”。补充细节时,可以举出通勤和共享单车两个具体例子;注意主谓一致,例如“many people ride”。“anywhere in the street”不够自然,可改为“at bike-sharing stations around the city”。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient. Also, public bike-sharing schemes make it easy to rent a bike around the city.
× I have a bike when I was a child.
✓ I had a bike when I was a child.
这句话描述的是童年时的经历,应用一般过去时。have 的过去式是 had,因此应将 have 改为 had。
× And after that I just try a little bit.
✓ And after that I just tried a little bit.
这里是在叙述过去发生的事情,动词 try 应使用过去式 tried。
× I cannot.
✓ I couldn't.
这句话承接的是童年时学骑车的经历,表达过去没有能力做到某事,应使用表示过去能力的 couldn't,而不是表示现在情况的 cannot。
× Bite is a particularly, uh, especially good in my country.
✓ Bikes are especially good in my country.
这里泛指自行车,应使用复数主语 bikes。复数主语要搭配 are,不能使用 is。
× We could rent a bike anywhere in the street.
✓ We could rent a bike anywhere on the street.
表达在街上或街边可以租车时,通常使用介词 on,而不是 in。