Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. When I was seven years old, my father brought me a bike as a birthday gift. I like it very much and I started to ride the bike for a long time.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. Bikes are very popular in our country. A lot of people use bikes to travel to other places or they also use bike as a way to exercise.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答切题,也提供了年龄和生日礼物等具体细节。但注意时态统一:讲童年经历时应使用过去时,例如把“I like”改为“I liked”。“brought me a bike”在这里不太自然,可改为“bought me a bike”或“gave me a bike”;“started to ride the bike for a long time”表达不自然,可以改为说明你经常骑车或骑车去了哪里。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was seven, my father bought me a bike for my birthday. I loved it and rode it around my neighborhood almost every day.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答直接,并提到了骑车出行和锻炼两个用途,内容清楚。可以避免重复使用“Yes, of course”和“Bikes are very popular”来表达同一意思;“use bike”应改为“use bikes”或“ride a bike”。建议补充具体人群或场景,让理由更有说服力,并用“also”或“because”等连接表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, they are quite popular in my country. Many people ride bikes to work or school, especially in busy cities, because they’re convenient and inexpensive. Others cycle for exercise at weekends.
× I like it very much and I started to ride the bike for a long time.
✓ I liked it very much, and I started to ride the bike for a long time.
这句话描述的是小时候的经历,整体语境是过去时,因此表示“喜欢”的 like 应改为过去式 liked。建议根据事件发生的时间统一使用相应时态。
× A lot of people use bikes to travel to other places or they also use bike as a way to exercise.
✓ A lot of people use bikes to travel to other places, or they also use bikes as a way to exercise.
这里泛指人们使用自行车,前半句用复数 bikes,后半句也应保持复数形式。单数可数名词 bike 不能在这里单独使用。描述一般类别时,可以使用复数名词,如 bikes。