Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Um No, apparently not I don't know why I don't like bikes I think but I hope whatever I go to learn how to ride a bike because I have heard that in the Netherlands

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

In my country no in my country we use cars or buses to go whatever we want like me as a child if my parents can give me a right

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly and make your meaning clear. Your answer contains conflicting ideas—you say you did not have a bike and may not like bikes, but then say you hope to learn to ride one. Use correct phrasing such as “I hope to learn” and complete your final idea by explaining what you have heard about cycling in the Netherlands.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I’m not sure why, but I never learned to ride one. I’d like to learn someday because I’ve heard that cycling is very popular in the Netherlands.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: State your opinion once, then support it with a clear reason or example. Avoid repeating “in my country,” and use natural expressions such as “get around” and “give me a ride.” Your final clause is incomplete, so explain how your family usually travelled instead.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people get around by car or bus because these options are more convenient. When I was a child, my parents usually drove me wherever I needed to go.

Ngữ pháp

7: Future tense issue

× I hope whatever I go to learn how to ride a bike.

✓ I hope that I will learn how to ride a bike.

The original wording does not express the intended future action grammatically. Use will learn to describe something the speaker hopes to do in the future. The phrase whatever I go to is not appropriate here.

5: Past tense issue

× Like me as a child, if my parents can give me a right.

✓ When I was a child, I would go by car or bus, or my parents could give me a ride.

The answer refers to the speaker's childhood, so can should be changed to could to fit the past context. Also, a ride is the correct expression for being taken somewhere; a right has a different meaning. The correction makes the fragment into a complete sentence.

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