Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I had a bike it have like black color and it was my first childhood bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, but not that much

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then add one or two relevant details. Use the past tense consistently: say “it was,” not “it have,” and describe the colour naturally as “black.” Avoid repeating “childhood” when “when I was a child” already gives that information.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a black bike when I was a child. It was my first bike, and I used to ride it around my neighbourhood after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant, but “not that much” is vague and the response is too short to develop your opinion. Clarify how popular bikes are and give a specific reason or example, using a linking phrase such as “because” or “for example.”

Ví dụ: Bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among students and people who live near their workplaces. However, they are less common in large cities because traffic can be heavy and public transport is convenient.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Yes I had a bike it have like black color and it was my first childhood bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike. It was black, and it was my first bike as a child.

The answer refers to a bike the student had in the past, so the verb should be in the past tense. Replace have with was to describe the bike's color.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes I had a bike it have like black color and it was my first childhood bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike. It was black, and it was my first bike as a child.

The original joins several complete thoughts without appropriate punctuation, creating a run-on sentence. Separate the ideas with a period and use a conjunction to connect related details.

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