Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike when I was young. I remember that is a present from my dad when I was six. I just graduated from kindergarten and about went to the

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

In the past, yes, when I was young, uh, lots of people chose bikes to go to work or go to school, but nowadays, um, with the developments of technology, I think most families have a

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Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,但时态错误较多:讲过去的经历应使用过去时,如“had”和“was”。“a present from my dad”前后需要完整表达;最后一句没有说完,影响连贯性。建议用两到三句说明自行车是谁送的、你当时多大,以及你如何使用它。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad gave it to me as a present when I was six, just after I finished kindergarten. I rode it around my neighborhood and was very excited to have my own bike.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 你尝试比较过去和现在,这是不错的思路,但回答在“most families have a”处中断,观点没有完整表达。建议先明确回答自行车现在是否仍然流行,再用完整句子说明过去与现在的差异,并补充具体原因或例子。可以用“these days”“because”或“for example”连接内容;表达“技术发展”时可说“advances in technology”。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are still popular in my country, although people use them differently now. In the past, many people rode bikes to work or school because they were affordable and convenient. These days, more people use cars or public transport, but cycling is still common for exercise and short trips.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes, I have a bike when I was young.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was young.

句子中的“when I was young”指过去的时间,因此描述当时拥有自行车的状态应使用一般过去时“had”,而不是现在时“have”。建议根据时间状语判断动词时态。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× I remember that is a present from my dad when I was six.

✓ I remember that it was a present from my dad when I was six.

“when I was six”说明这件事发生在过去,因此从句中的系动词应使用过去式“was”,而不是“is”。另外,在“that”引导的从句中补上主语“it”,句子结构更完整。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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