Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yeah, absolutely. I have a nice bike when I was a kid, you know, I really like a riding bike because riding bike is fun for for me and and apartment that is where.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Mm-hmm. Yeah. Uh, riding bike is immensely popular in our country and, uh, you know, uh, nowadays it's more and more popular and many people riding bike, uh, it's a good way to stay healthy.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,并注意使用过去时:有自行车应说“I had a bike”。“like riding a bike”中,like 后接动名词,且应说“riding a bike”。删去重复的“for”和“and”以及无法理解的“apartment that is where”,再补充一两个具体细节,例如自行车的颜色、骑车的地点或骑车时的感受。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a red bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school. I loved it because it gave me a sense of freedom.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答切题,也给出了骑车有益健康的理由。请将“riding bike”改为“riding bikes”或“cycling”,并将“many people riding bike”改为“many people ride bikes”。避免重复“popular”和过多填充词;可以补充一个具体原因或场景,例如通勤、锻炼,或城市里常见的共享单车。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people cycle to work or use shared bikes for short trips because they are convenient and help people stay healthy.
× I have a nice bike when I was a kid.
✓ I had a nice bike when I was a kid.
句子中的“when I was a kid”指过去的时间,因此表示“拥有”的动词也应使用过去式“had”,不能用现在时“have”。描述过去的经历时,要注意相关动词的时态保持一致。
× I really like a riding bike because riding bike is fun for for me.
✓ I really liked riding a bike because riding a bike was fun for me.
这句话是在谈论小时候的经历,因此“like”应改为过去式“liked”;“is fun”也应改为“was fun”。叙述过去的情况时,相关动词通常要使用过去时。
× I really like a riding bike.
✓ I really liked riding a bike.
“like”后面可以接动词-ing形式表示喜欢做某事,因此应说“like riding”,而不是“like a riding”。此处“riding”是动名词,不需要在它前面加冠词“a”。
× because riding bike is fun for for me.
✓ because riding a bike was fun for me.
“bike”是可数名词单数,前面需要限定词。这里可以用“a bike”,说“riding a bike”。注意不要重复使用“for”。
× riding bike is immensely popular in our country
✓ riding bikes is immensely popular in our country
泛指骑自行车这一活动时,可以用复数“bikes”,说“riding bikes”。也可以说“riding a bike”,但不能直接说“riding bike”。
× many people riding bike
✓ many people ride bikes
“many people riding bike”缺少完整谓语,不能独立构成完整句子。表达一般情况时,可以用主语“many people”加一般现在时谓语“ride”,并用复数“bikes”泛指自行车。