Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Of course I have a bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, nowadays and more and more people uh, think the house is extremely important, so and they think the riding a bike is helpful for their health.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,但时态错误:谈过去的童年经历应使用一般过去时,将“have”改为“had”。可以再补充一个具体细节,例如你几岁开始骑车、骑车的地点或用途,让回答更完整自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答自行车是否受欢迎,再用清晰的原因和具体场景支持观点。“the house”在这里应为“health”;“the riding a bike”应改为“riding a bike”。避免使用“uh”和重复连接词“so and”,并注意“nowadays”不能与“yes”后面的句子生硬连接。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are becoming more popular in my country. Many people ride them for exercise because cycling is good for their health, and it can also be a convenient way to get around in busy cities.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Of course I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Of course, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子中的“when I was a child”表示过去的时间,因此表示“拥有”的动词也要用过去式。应将“have”改为“had”。

16: Incorrect conjunction use(连词使用错误)

× Yes, nowadays and more and more people uh, think the house is extremely important, so and they think the riding a bike is helpful for their health.

✓ Yes. Nowadays, more and more people think the house is extremely important, and they think riding a bike is helpful for their health.

“Nowadays”后不需要用“and”连接“more and more people”;后面的“so and”也把两个连词错误地连用。可以用句号结束前一部分,再用“and”连接后面两个并列想法。

17: Incorrect use of the definite article(定冠词使用错误)

× Yes, nowadays and more and more people uh, think the house is extremely important, so and they think the riding a bike is helpful for their health.

✓ Yes. Nowadays, more and more people think the house is extremely important, and they think riding a bike is helpful for their health.

“riding a bike”是动名词短语,在这里作“think”的宾语,不需要在前面加定冠词“the”。应删去“the”,直接说“think riding a bike is helpful”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Important— Significant; Main; Powerful
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