Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I used to have a small mob called TVS. So it was a fifty C mopet and I used to go with it to my school, colleges and also to tuition centers.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Most of the country population drives bikes so of course bikes are very popular in India as it is comparatively inexpensive. So people try to use it as their only vehicle to move things from one place to another.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then describe the bike and explain where you rode it. Correct the vocabulary and grammar: say “a small TVS moped with a 50cc engine,” not “small mob” or “fifty C mopet.” Use parallel phrasing such as “to school, college, and tuition classes,” and avoid repeating “used to” unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a small TVS moped with a 50cc engine. I used to ride it to school and, later, to college and tuition classes.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear answer and support it with a specific reason. Use “most people in the country” rather than “most of the country population,” and make the pronouns agree: bikes are “inexpensive” and people use “them.” Replace the awkward phrase “move things from one place to another” with a more natural explanation, such as commuting or carrying goods. Use a linking word like “because” to connect your reason.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in India because they’re relatively inexpensive and convenient. Many people use them as their main form of transport, especially for commuting and carrying small loads.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors

× Most of the country population drives bikes so of course bikes are very popular in India as it is comparatively inexpensive.

✓ Most of the country's population rides bikes, so bikes are very popular in India because they are comparatively inexpensive.

The phrase 'the country population' is not formed naturally in English. Use the possessive form 'the country's population' or say 'the population of the country.' The revised sentence also connects the ideas more clearly.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Most of the country population drives bikes so of course bikes are very popular in India as it is comparatively inexpensive. So people try to use it as their only vehicle to move things from one place to another.

✓ Most of the country's population rides bikes, so bikes are very popular in India because they are comparatively inexpensive. People try to use them as their only means of transportation from one place to another.

The pronouns 'it' and 'them' must agree with the noun they refer to. 'Bikes' is plural, so use 'they' rather than 'it' when referring to bikes, and use 'them' rather than 'it' in the next sentence. 'Their only means of transportation' is a natural way to express the intended idea.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Small— Little; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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