Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, it was very popular in our city. Before we bike every afternoon with my friends going every places, every city

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, but use the past tense because the question is about your childhood: say “I had,” not “I have.” Add one relevant detail, such as when you rode it or what you enjoyed about it.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighbourhood after school, and I really enjoyed exploring with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question about your country in the present tense, and make sure your supporting detail matches that topic. Use “bikes are popular,” not “it was popular.” Clarify your example with natural phrasing, such as where people ride and why. Avoid the unclear repetition “every places, every city.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them to get to work or school because they are convenient and inexpensive. When I was younger, I also rode my bike around my neighbourhood with friends.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The phrase when I was a child refers to a completed period in the past, so use the simple past had rather than the present perfect have.

6: Present tense issue

× Yes, it was very popular in our city. Before we bike every afternoon with my friends going every places, every city

✓ Yes, they are very popular in our city. In the past, my friends and I rode bikes every afternoon and went everywhere in the city.

The question asks whether bikes are popular now, so use the present tense are rather than was. The revised answer uses the present tense for current popularity and the past tense for the former routine.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, it was very popular in our city. Before we bike every afternoon with my friends going every places, every city

✓ Yes, they are very popular in our city. In the past, my friends and I rode bikes every afternoon and went everywhere in the city.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use they to refer to bikes.

1: Singular and plural issue

× Yes, it was very popular in our city. Before we bike every afternoon with my friends going every places, every city

✓ Yes, they are very popular in our city. In the past, my friends and I rode bikes every afternoon and went everywhere in the city.

Every must be followed by a singular countable noun, so every places is incorrect. Here, everywhere is a more natural way to express the intended meaning.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes, it was very popular in our city. Before we bike every afternoon with my friends going every places, every city

✓ Yes, they are very popular in our city. In the past, my friends and I rode bikes every afternoon and went everywhere in the city.

The ending going every places, every city does not form a complete, clear clause. Connect the actions with and, and use the complete phrase went everywhere in the city.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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