Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, When I were a child my family were so poor that I cannot afford a bike. I wish I had one. I love to have one, but I I didn't. They couldn't afford me a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. Here the youngsters mostly use bikes, uh, for their daily chores and they love riding bikes I think.

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then explain the situation briefly. Correct the tense and subject–verb agreement: say “when I was a child,” “my family couldn’t afford,” and “I couldn’t afford one.” Avoid repeating the same idea, and use “I wish I had had one” to describe a past regret.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. I used to wish I had had one, especially when I saw other children riding theirs.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant, but reduce repetition and remove fillers such as “uh” and “I think.” Use a more natural phrase such as “young people” instead of “youngsters,” and add one specific detail about how or where people use bikes. Be precise about whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many use bicycles to get to school or run errands because they’re affordable and convenient. In busy areas, they can also be easier to park than cars.

Ngữ pháp

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× When I were a child

✓ When I was a child

The subject I takes was, not were, in the past tense. Use I was, while were is used with you, we, and they.

5: Past tense issue

× My family were so poor that I cannot afford a bike.

✓ My family were so poor that I could not afford a bike.

The sentence describes a situation in the past, so cannot should be changed to could not. Were is acceptable for family in varieties of English that treat collective nouns as plural.

5: Past tense issue

× I love to have one.

✓ I would have loved to have one.

The speaker is describing a desire they had as a child, so the verb should reflect that past time. Would have loved expresses a past wish that was not fulfilled.

26: Sentence structure errors

× I I didn't.

✓ But I didn't get one.

The subject I is repeated, and didn't is left without a clear action. Remove the repeated subject and add get one to make the sentence clear and complete.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Poor— Poverty-stricken; Substandard; Meager; Unproductive; Deficient in
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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