Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

When I was a child, I saw my sister has a beautiful bike, so I asked my parents to buy a bag for me.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, J just 14 years ago, umm, everyone have a bike in in my country. And when people get married, uh, a bike can be a gift for the for the woman.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答自己小时候是否有自行车。注意时态一致:讲过去的经历时,用“saw my sister had”或“my sister had”;“bag”可能是笔误,应为“bike”。之后可以补充自行车的颜色、用途或骑车的经历,避免回答与问题不符。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My older sister had a beautiful blue one, so I asked my parents to buy me a similar bike. I used to ride it around our neighborhood after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 开头直接说明自行车现在是否受欢迎,并把时间表达说清楚;如果你想比较过去和现在,可以说“about 14 years ago”。讲过去时用“everyone had”,讲现在则用“everyone has”。删去重复词和填充词,并具体说明自行车作为结婚礼物的背景或原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes used to be very popular in my country. About 14 years ago, almost everyone had one, and in some communities, a bicycle was given to a bride as a wedding gift. These days, though, more people use cars or public transport.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× When I was a child, I saw my sister has a beautiful bike, so I asked my parents to buy a bag for me.

✓ When I was a child, I saw that my sister had a beautiful bike, so I asked my parents to buy a bag for me.

这句话讲述的是过去发生的事情,主句动词“saw”是过去时,因此从句中的“has”也应使用过去时“had”。可以在“saw”后加“that”,让从句结构更清楚。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes, J just 14 years ago, umm, everyone have a bike in in my country.

✓ Yes, just 14 years ago, everyone had a bike in my country.

“14 years ago”表示过去的时间,所以“have”应改为过去式“had”。“everyone”虽然表示所有人,但语法上视为单数;不过这里使用“had”是因为句子讲的是过去。

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