Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

It is. My father bought the black for me and I so love it. It has the great red color and modern shape. I read it all the day on the neighborhood.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think in my country people always read back to work or study.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答“有”或“没有”,再补充一两个具体细节。注意使用过去时:用“bought”描述父亲买车,用“loved”描述当时的感受,用“rode”表示骑车。颜色描述前后要一致;“all day”表示“一整天”,“around the neighborhood”表示“在社区周围”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father bought me a black bike when I was a child, and I loved it. It had a comfortable seat and a simple design. I rode it around the neighborhood almost every day.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 直接回答自行车是否受欢迎,并说明人们通常在什么场合骑车。这里应使用“ride bikes”,而不是“read back”;可以补充骑车通勤或上学的原因,例如方便、经济或环保。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school, especially for short distances. They are affordable and convenient, and they can also help people avoid traffic.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× It is.

✓ I did.

问题询问你小时候是否有自行车,使用一般过去时。回答时应使用助动词 did 呼应问句中的 did;“It is”既没有使用过去时,也没有正确回应“Did you…?”。

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× My father bought the black for me and I so love it.

✓ My father bought a black one for me, and I loved it very much.

“black”在这里是修饰自行车的形容词,后面需要用“one”代替前文提到的自行车;表示一辆黑色自行车时应说“a black one”,而不是“the black”。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× My father bought the black for me and I so love it.

✓ My father bought a black one for me, and I loved it very much.

句子描述的是小时候的经历,因此“love”应改为过去式“loved”,与前面的“bought”保持时态一致。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× It has the great red color and modern shape.

✓ It had a great red color and a modern shape.

这里是在描述小时候拥有的自行车,应使用过去式“had”,而不是现在时“has”。

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× It has the great red color and modern shape.

✓ It had a great red color and a modern shape.

“color”和“shape”在此处都是单数可数名词,需要冠词。“great red color”前用不定冠词“a”;“modern shape”前也需要补上“a”。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× I read it all the day on the neighborhood.

✓ I rode it all day around the neighborhood.

句子讲的是过去骑自行车的经历,应使用“ride”的过去式“rode”。“read”意为“阅读”,不适用于骑自行车的语境。

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× I read it all the day on the neighborhood.

✓ I rode it all day around the neighborhood.

表示“整天”时通常说“all day”,不在“day”前加“the”。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× I read it all the day on the neighborhood.

✓ I rode it all day around the neighborhood.

表示在社区附近骑车,应使用“around the neighborhood”,而不是“on the neighborhood”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Great— Considerable; Large; Prominent; Magnificent; Enthusiastic
Modern— Present-day; Fashionable
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