Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did. I when I was a child, I have a bike and I used, used the bike, uh, uh, when I uh, go, went to the friend's house every day.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think so my country the bicycle is are popular in Japan so because Japanese is very small country so the road is also

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: You answered the question directly and included a relevant detail, but the answer has repeated words and several tense errors. Use the past simple consistently ("had," "used," and "went"), and avoid restarting the sentence. Add a clear linking phrase such as "I often used it to..."

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it to my friends’ houses after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is unfinished, so the main idea and supporting reason are unclear. Start with a complete answer, then explain why bikes are popular. Use correct phrasing such as "bicycles are popular in Japan" and "Japan is a relatively small country." Avoid using both "so" and "because" for the same connection, and finish your supporting detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in Japan. Japan is a relatively small country, and many people find bikes convenient for short trips, especially in busy cities.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× I when I was a child, I have a bike and I used, used the bike, uh, uh, when I uh, go, went to the friend's house every day.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike and used it when I went to my friend's house every day.

The answer describes a childhood experience, so use the past tense had instead of have. Went is the correct past-tense form of go. Keep verb tenses consistent when describing a past routine.

1: Singular and plural issue

× I think so my country the bicycle is are popular in Japan so because Japanese is very small country so the road is also

✓ I think so. Bicycles are popular in Japan because Japan is a very small country, so the roads are also...

The general statement refers to bicycles and roads as plural nouns, so use bicycles and roads. Use the plural verb are with these plural subjects. When speaking generally about a category of things, use the plural form, as in Bicycles are popular.

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× I think so my country the bicycle is are popular in Japan so because Japanese is very small country so the road is also

✓ I think so. Bicycles are popular in Japan because Japan is a very small country, so the roads are also...

The verb must agree with its subject. Bicycles and roads are plural, so they take are, not is. Avoid leaving both is and are in the sentence; choose the verb form that matches the subject.

22: Article errors

× I think so my country the bicycle is are popular in Japan so because Japanese is very small country so the road is also

✓ I think so. Bicycles are popular in Japan because Japan is a very small country, so the roads are also...

The singular countable noun country needs an article. Use a before very small country: Japan is a very small country. Remember that singular countable nouns generally need an article or another determiner.

16: Incorrect conjunction use

× I think so my country the bicycle is are popular in Japan so because Japanese is very small country so the road is also

✓ I think so. Bicycles are popular in Japan because Japan is a very small country, so the roads are also...

Because and so should not be used together to connect the same cause-and-effect relationship. Use because to introduce the reason, or use so to introduce the result. The final clause is incomplete in the transcript, so finish it with the intended information.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Small— Little; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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