Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child, but actually I had two bikes, a red bike and a gold bike. The gold bike was my first one and the red 1 was my second one. The gold one, of course, since it was my first one, was the best one overall and people called me Golden Boy.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do think bags are popular in my country. Whether you are in the rural areas or in the big city or a small town, the bikes you see are everywhere. People use bikes so often. Going to work, going to and from work, going to school, going back home from school, going to athletic practice, going back home. Bikes are commonly used in any.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答直接,也提供了具体细节和有趣的昵称。可以减少重复,例如不必多次强调金色自行车是第一辆;“of course”和“the best one overall”在这里略显生硬。注意使用自然、准确的表达,并将细节组织得更紧凑。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had two bikes as a child: a red one and a gold one. The gold bike was my first, so it was especially memorable, and my friends even called me “Golden Boy.”
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 先确保回答中的关键词准确:问题问的是 bikes,但开头说成了 bags。回答中“going to work”等内容重复较多,最后的“in any”也不是完整、自然的表达。建议先直接表明自行车很受欢迎,再用一两个具体场景说明原因,并用连接词串联细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. You can see people riding them in both cities and rural areas, especially when they commute to work or go to school. They’re convenient and inexpensive, so many people use them for short trips.
× Going to work, going to and from work, going to school, going back home from school, going to athletic practice, going back home.
✓ People use bikes to go to work and back, go to school and back home, and travel to and from athletic practice.
原句是一串以动名词形式开头的短语,没有完整的主语和谓语,因此不是完整句子。可以将这些活动接在主句后,并用“People use bikes to...”表达骑车的用途。
× Bikes are commonly used in any.
✓ Bikes are commonly used everywhere.
“any”通常需要后接名词(例如“any place”),不能单独用在这里表示“到处”。表达“到处都在使用”时,应使用副词“everywhere”。