Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I have when I were child. I have a bike on go to school and I often have a bike with my family on weekend.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, in my country I think by the popular because very because many students go to school by bike and many worker go to work by bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,并使用过去时,因为你谈的是童年经历:“Yes, I did.” 注意语法:用“when I was a child”,而不是“when I were child”;用“rode my bike to school”,而不是“have a bike on go to school”;“on weekends”表示“在周末”。可以补充一个具体细节,例如和家人骑车去哪里。避免重复使用“have a bike”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it to school. On weekends, I sometimes went for bike rides with my family.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 先清楚表达观点,例如“Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.” 避免重复或不完整的表达,如“I think by the popular because very because”;注意主谓一致,应说“many workers”。接着用具体原因支持观点,并使用“because”连接句子。还可以补充自行车方便、适合短途出行等细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. Many students ride them to school, and many workers cycle to work. They are especially convenient for short journeys.
× Yes I have when I were child.
✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.
问题:回答过去时的问题时用了现在时 have。这里应使用过去时,回答可说“Yes, I did”,并用 had 表示小时候拥有自行车。
× Yes I have when I were child.
✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.
主语是 I 时,be 动词的过去式应为 was,而不是 were。建议检查主语与 be 动词的搭配:I was,you/we/they were。
× Yes I have when I were child.
✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.
child 是可数名词单数,前面需要冠词。这里应说 a child。
× I have a bike on go to school and I often have a bike with my family on weekend.
✓ I had a bike that I used to go to school, and I often rode bikes with my family on weekends.
这句话描述的是小时候的经历,应使用过去时。have 应改为 had;表达和家人一起骑车时,用 rode 表示过去的骑行经历。回答过去经历时,注意将相关动词统一为过去时。
× I have a bike on go to school and I often have a bike with my family on weekend.
✓ I had a bike that I used to go to school, and I often rode bikes with my family on weekends.
on go to school 中介词用法不正确。表达“用自行车去上学”时,可以说 go to school by bike;表达“有一辆自行车供上学使用”时,可以说 a bike to use to go to school。
× I have a bike on go to school and I often have a bike with my family on weekend.
✓ I had a bike that I used to go to school, and I often rode bikes with my family on weekends.
表示每个周末或通常的周末活动时,常用 on weekends,而不是 on weekend。这里应使用复数 weekends。
× Yes, in my country I think by the popular because very because many students go to school by bike and many worker go to work by bike.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many students go to school by bike and many workers ride their bikes to work.
I think by the popular 的结构不完整,缺少表达“受欢迎”的主语和 be 动词。可以使用 bikes are popular,并把 in my country 放在合适的位置。
× Yes, in my country I think by the popular because very because many students go to school by bike and many worker go to work by bike.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many students go to school by bike and many workers ride their bikes to work.
句中重复使用 because,且 very 放在两个 because 之间,使连接关系不清楚。保留一个 because 来引出原因即可。
× Yes, in my country I think by the popular because very because many students go to school by bike and many worker go to work by bike.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many students go to school by bike and many workers ride their bikes to work.
many 后面应接可数名词复数,因此 worker 应改为 workers。可以记住:many + 复数可数名词。