Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Certainly, there are many kids nowadays ride a bicycle when they are 7 or 8 years old, which shows us that it is really popular in our country.

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Tổng

Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 5.0

Gợi ý: Answer the examiner's question directly instead of repeating it. Start with a clear response such as “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” and then add one specific detail about the bike or how you used it. Aim for two or three natural sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence first, such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Correct the grammar by changing “there are many kids nowadays ride” to “many children ride bikes nowadays” or “there are many children who ride bikes nowadays.” Also, use a more natural expression than “shows us,” and add a specific reason or example to make your answer more effective.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many children start riding them when they are seven or eight years old, and cycling is also common among adults because it is an affordable and convenient way to travel.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors

× Certainly, there are many kids nowadays ride a bicycle when they are 7 or 8 years old, which shows us that it is really popular in our country.

✓ Certainly, many kids nowadays ride bicycles when they are 7 or 8 years old, which shows that cycling is really popular in our country.

The original sentence incorrectly combines 'there are' with the clause 'many kids ride.' Use either 'There are many kids who ride bicycles...' or, more naturally here, 'Many kids nowadays ride bicycles...' The plural noun 'bicycles' is preferable when speaking about cycling in general. 'Shows that' is also more concise and natural than 'shows us that' in this context.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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