Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a pink bike when I was a child and I travel with my mother with this bike and we have a good time with it.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, bikes are popular in my country. It can see it everywhere in the street and it is the normal travel ship in our daily life.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答内容基本直接,也提供了颜色和与母亲骑车的经历,但时态错误较明显:过去经历应使用“had”“rode/traveled”和“had a good time”,不能使用现在时“have”“travel”“have”。“travel with my mother with this bike”表达不自然,建议改为“ride it with my mother”。另外,可以用“and”以外的连接方式,使句子更清晰;答案控制在两句话内即可。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my mother, and we always had a great time together.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,但第二句存在严重语法和词汇问题。“It can see it”应改为“you can see them”或“they can be seen”,“in the street”可改为“on the streets”,“travel ship”不是正确表达,应使用“means of transport”或“way to travel”。建议补充一个具体原因,例如自行车方便、环保或适合短途出行,并使用“because”连接。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. You can see them everywhere on the streets because they are convenient and environmentally friendly, especially for short trips.
× Yes, I have a pink bike when I was a child and I travel with my mother with this bike and we have a good time with it.
✓ Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child, and I traveled with my mother on it. We had a good time.
因为问题询问的是童年时期的经历,所以整句话应使用一般过去时:have 改为 had,travel 改为 traveled,have a good time 改为 had a good time。表达“骑车”或“乘坐自行车”时,应使用介词 on,而不是重复使用 with。建议描述过去经历时,先确定时间,再确保所有相关动词都使用过去式。
× Yes, bikes are popular in my country. It can see it everywhere in the street and it is the normal travel ship in our daily life.
✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country. They can be seen everywhere on the streets, and they are a common form of transportation in our daily lives.
Bikes 是复数,因此不能用单数代词 it,应使用复数代词 they。原句 It can see it 的主语和宾语使用不正确,而且想表达“自行车到处可见”,应使用被动语态 can be seen。表示“在街道上”时,使用 on the streets 更自然。normal travel ship 不是正确的英语表达,建议使用 common form of transportation,表示“常见的交通方式”。