Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I used to have a bike when I was a child. I rode it around the neighborhood with my friends almost every day for fun and to explore nearby parks.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Well, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips and many cities have bike share programs. For example, I see a lot of people using shared bikes to go to work or the market and I sometimes ride my bike bike to work.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 92.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,结构清晰,并且使用了“used to”准确描述过去的习惯。细节也比较具体,如和朋友一起骑车、去附近的公园。可以进一步加入一个简短的个人感受或具体回忆,使答案更加生动;同时注意避免让句子过于重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike around the neighborhood with my friends almost every day. We often explored nearby parks, and I really enjoyed the sense of freedom it gave me.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 84.0

Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,并提供了价格、便利性和共享单车项目等理由,内容较充分。建议在两个理由之间加入连接词,例如“Moreover”或“This is also because”,以增强逻辑;“bike bike”是明显的重复错误,应改为“my bike”。还可以把最后一句拆分或稍作调整,使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. Moreover, many cities have bike-sharing programs, so people often use shared bikes to commute or go to the market. I sometimes ride my bike to work as well.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× For example, I see a lot of people using shared bikes to go to work or the market and I sometimes ride my bike bike to work.

✓ For example, I see a lot of people using shared bikes to go to work or the market, and I sometimes ride my bike to work.

“bike bike”中同一个名词重复了一次,造成句子结构错误。应删除多余的“bike”。另外,在连接两个完整分句的并列连词“and”前加逗号,可以使句子结构更清晰。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Cheap— Inexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
Fun— Merriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Short— Concise; Brief; Scarce; Briefly
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