Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

So I had a bike and my grandfather one who rode that bike for me.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, in Sri Lanka, uh, bikes are very popular. So for uh like very short distance uh, travels most of the people they use bikes.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and use a clear grammatical structure. The phrase “my grandfather one” is incorrect, and “rode that bike for me” does not clearly express your meaning. You could say that you had a bike and that your grandfather taught you how to ride it. Add one specific detail about when or where you used it.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My grandfather gave it to me and taught me how to ride it. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and gives a reason, but it contains unnecessary fillers and grammatical errors. Say “For short-distance travel, most people use bikes” instead of “for very short distance travels, most of the people they use bikes.” Improve the response by adding a specific example, such as commuting, avoiding traffic, or saving money.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in Sri Lanka, especially for short-distance travel. Many people use them to go to nearby shops or workplaces because they are affordable and convenient. They also help people avoid traffic and reduce transportation costs.

Ngữ pháp

23: Sentence without a verb

× So I had a bike and my grandfather one who rode that bike for me.

✓ So, I had a bike, and my grandfather was the one who rode it for me.

The phrase my grandfather one is missing the verb was. Adding was makes the phrase a complete clause. The pronoun it is also more natural than repeating that bike.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× So for uh like very short distance uh, travels most of the people they use bikes.

✓ For very short-distance travel, most people use bikes.

The subject most people should not be followed by the unnecessary pronoun they. Using both creates a redundant subject. Also, travel is the natural uncountable noun when referring to travel in general.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Short— Concise; Brief; Scarce; Briefly
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