Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer responds directly and gives a reason, but the phrase “teach us well in riding a bike” is unnatural. Say “teach us how to ride a bike” instead. Also, avoid repeating “bike” and “ride a bike” unnecessarily. You could make the answer more effective by adding one specific result or feeling, such as feeling left out when other children cycled.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was growing up because my father never taught me how to ride one. As a result, I missed the chance to cycle with my friends, and I only learned to ride a bike as an adult.

Gợi ý: You give a clear opinion and a relevant reason, but there is repetition in “it’s it’s,” and “congested in roads” should be “congested on the roads” or simply “the roads are congested.” The phrase “take an opportunity” is less natural here; use “take the opportunity” or “learn to ride.” Improve the structure by stating your opinion first, then explaining how traffic has increased people’s interest in cycling. Add a specific example, such as commuters using bikes for short journeys.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are becoming quite popular in the Philippines, especially in large cities. Since traffic is often heavy and the roads are congested, many people use bicycles for short trips to work or nearby places. They are a convenient and affordable alternative to cars and public transport.

× I didn't have a bike when I was growing up because my father didn't teach us well in riding a bike, so I didn't have any chances to learn how to ride a bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was growing up because my father didn't teach us how to ride a bike, so I didn't have any chances to learn how to ride a bike.

The preposition in is not used after teach when introducing an ability or skill. Use teach someone how to do something instead. For example: My parents taught me how to swim.

× Right now in the Philippines it is quite popular to have a bike, especially since the traffic is bad and it's it's usually congested in roads. So people are trying to take an opportunity to learn how to ride a bike.

✓ Right now in the Philippines, it is quite popular to have a bike, especially since the traffic is bad and it is usually congested on the roads. So people are trying to take an opportunity to learn how to ride a bike.

Use on, not in, with roads when describing traffic conditions: traffic is congested on the roads. The repeated it's was removed as a correction of the spoken repetition. Remember to use on the road or on the roads for traffic and vehicles.